Following my tutor’s feedback I reworked Assignment 5.
This is a short video explaining the result, followed by a textual description with images; my reworded artist’s statement; and a brief overall evaluation of my Drawing 1 experience:
My original Assignment 5 submission – chronological story of my ‘journey’ and overly busy
My reworked Assignment 5 submission – pared back and refocused in a more imaginative, less chronological way
Detailed images from the reworked submission
‘Creepy-crawly man’ detail – drawing in ink pen on insulation boardCouple – Ink pen on insulation boardWoman – in water-soluble wax pastel on insulation boardMan – Graphite pencil and ink pen on insulation boardWoman – Block ink and water brush on insulation boardNew window into detailed drawing, with drawing on flapiPad drawing framed in canvasiPad landscape drawing framed in canvasiPad drawing framed in canvas, with background face through the door of the ‘shotgun croft house’Original detail of the start of my journey – “wee boy to big boy”Original detail of the start of my journey – the ‘viewpoint’Scratching into overpainted area of original work – beach stump with ropeScratching into overpainted area of original work – chair‘Cutting in’ – skyscape through a peek hole‘Cutting in’ – still life through a peep holeDitched ink drawing on A3 pvc clear sheet – not quite up to scratch
